Monday, April 19, 2010

Links for Soldier's Heart

Here are some links that might be of use as we/if we go forward with this Soldier's Heart Project.

PTSD Combat: Winning the War Within
A blog with a lot of information and links on PTSD in veterans. She also wrote a book with the same title.

Warrior's Sanctuary
I'm linking this page because of a paragraph in a comment that I found relevant:

This is such a complex issue, but one thing I have learned from all the PTSD experts I’ve interviewed for my own articles on the subject is this: any help to the family helps the PTSD sufferer. Lisa Jaycox, senior behavioral scientist at the RAND Corporation, says that the more stress a family is under, the harder it is to recover from PTSD. So even if I think I can’t possibly “cure” or “fix” the underlying issue, if I can help the family by mowing the lawn for them or bringing some meals, by offering to watch the kids for a while or by cleaning their house, that all serves to help relieve pressure that someone with PTSD just may not be equipped to handle. I would also encourage the veteran to get plugged in with other vets dealing with similar issues (preferably with a leader trained to really help), because so many times veterans don’t want to share their traumatic experiences with loved ones because they want to keep their minds innocent of the horrors of war.


Iraqi War Veterans Organization

with link to local advocates in North Carolina

Veterans Program at Citrus College

Boots to books with link to opportunity to donate for veterans to get books for program.

Monday, March 22, 2010

Writing a Book Review

Here's a nice link if you're writing a book review. It includes a sample book review on To Kill a Mockingbird and steps you can take in writing your own review.

Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Myth Resources

Prometheus and Pandora
at Myth Encyclopedia

The Judgment of Paris
at Living Myths

The Trojan War
at Stanford site

Persephone and Demeter
at Myth Man
at Sweet Briar College site
at Paleothea, Women in Myths


Theseus and the Minotaur
at Paleothea
at YouTube--animated
at YouTube

Hercules
at Tufts University site

Daedalus & Icarus
at Myth Man's Homework Help Center

Eros & Psyche
at Myth Man's Homework Help Center
at Paleothea

Echo & Narcissus
at Myth Man
at Paleothea

Oedipus Myth
at Myth Man

Antigone
at Paleothea

Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Can you say it in six words or less?

Never really finished anything, except cake.

Check out these other six word memoirs at the NPR site.

Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Is 100 Minutes Long Enough to Write an Essay?

We hope?

This week we've been working on a sane approach to the kind of timed 100-minute essay that is required for the writing test in March.

Here are the steps we came up with so far:
  1. Read the prompt.
  2. Understand the prompt. Pay particular attention to form and audience. A letter to the school board? A speech to a group of parents? An article for the school paper? Form and audience matters!
  3. Brainstorm. Whether you make a list or some kind of word splash, the point here is to begin to know what you know. What are the details you already know about the topic that you can use as building blocks to your essay?
  4. Make a map. True, some people prefer to start writing rather than mapping when they're beginning an essay. And, if you have a week to write an essay, that method can work well. When you only have 100 minutes, nearly everyone--including myself--needs to make a map to ensure that the essay will have some kind of order.
  5. Draft and introduction. Introductions are so important. They make that first impression. And, when in doubt, fall back on the classic three-part form for an introduction: A hook that addresses your audience; a link to your thesis; and, finally, your thesis.
  6. Write. Aim for filling the two pages that are provided.
  7. Edit. Make sure each sentence you've written is a complete sentence. Check spelling.
That's it. And entirely doable in 100 minutes. The key is practicing this a few times so that it begins to feel like second nature.

Saturday, January 16, 2010

Let the Writing Begin

We're starting a new semester of English II and have had a productive first week with lots of writing. If I can get a hold of the photos that students took of our whiteboard covered with potential topics I'll post those here. Meanwhile, here are excerpts from reflections written by students at the end of one week of writing and reading and thinking. There's a lot to write and read and think about, with most students taking at least two college courses--and, in some cases, as many as five. I think we're off to a strong start.

About Writing and the Daybook:
At first I didn’t know what to write but after a while I learned to just let go while I watched my hand fly across the paper to its own accord.

Writing is powerful. When you write something down you can see it and it is no longer just a thought floating around. By your thoughts being on paper, they have a meaning.

Writing helps me show my emotions the same way as when you make a painting.

One of my revelations that occurred this week was that writer’s block is really just your inner critic refusing to let your creativity reach its fullest potential.

I feel like writing is a better thing to do [as opposed to reading and interpreting] even though my hand says the opposite of this.

The daybook helps me to douse my insecurity.

The daybook takes away those “handcuffs” so you can write what you want, when you want.

About the Self:
I have found out more about myself as a writer over this last week than I have in the last nine years that I have been writing. Which makes me wonder, what took me so long to be able to try to figure myself out?

I am the kind of writer who draws inspiration from books, songs, other people, and past experiences; the kind of writer who now knows techniques to tell the inner critic to go away and go get coffee or something.

I’m the type of person who likes to ball everything up inside. And it’s not good when a person does that. It creates wrath inside. I believe if the world didn’t know how to read or write the world would go mad.

I struggle most with being Mr. Summary. You know, the kind of guy who takes a four page narrative essay and turns it into a one page summation.

My first reflection paper says that I am the type of writer who likes to write poetry and is inspired by music, emotions, and everyday life. I had never realized this was true until you asked that question. At that moment I realized that my life revolved around poetry. Every day I am looking for new things to write about and I don’t even realize it.

When we were going around the classroom sharing I was hit by a memory from elementary school so vividly it was like I was really there for an instant. It was Valentine’s Day, and all the children from my class had gone outside to play duck duck goose. I don’t remember seeing people and faces, all I could see were the trees and the sky. This short glimpse, though, showed me the difference between the way I saw things as a child and how I do now.

One activity this week triggered an epiphany. During the timeline, I was writing down memories and as I looked back over it I realized that the bad memories I had all played a part in shaping the kind of person and writer I am.

About English Class:
This class makes you think a lot. You have to stay outside the box.

I can share my writing or I can choose not to. I can read out loud or I can choose not to. There is a choice. Everyone likes to have a choice. It makes them feel important.

My favorite part of this course is that I don’t have to share unless I feel comfortable. A lot of teachers try to force students into sharing and that makes me really nervous. I feel a little bit shy right now, but I have a feeling I’ll be more comfortable in a couple of weeks.

About Reading:
A topic always has a meaning about what one is about to read and is also connected to the author and how he or she feels. Although I knew this before, I’ve never given much importance towards whether my assignments have a significant meaning to me. After this week I learned that I can always relate to what I am writing about, making the assignment more entertaining.

About the short chapter, “Stories Matter”:
I could picture everything in my head. I could see the mother’s agony in her eyes. The kids pulling on their mother’s clothes begging for food or a drop of water. People coming up to the reporter thinking she’s a doctor. I picture it all. This is great because if I start picturing things then I start writing more which is a great way to start.

About the essay, “The Silk Parachute”:
It was random and messy, but done in a very proper fashion where it all made sense in the end.

About the Week:
But the high expectation coming from my dad is almost life threatening. I mean, yeah, I made it look easy in K-5, but who can’t make it look easy then?