Monday, April 19, 2010

Links for Soldier's Heart

Here are some links that might be of use as we/if we go forward with this Soldier's Heart Project.

PTSD Combat: Winning the War Within
A blog with a lot of information and links on PTSD in veterans. She also wrote a book with the same title.

Warrior's Sanctuary
I'm linking this page because of a paragraph in a comment that I found relevant:

This is such a complex issue, but one thing I have learned from all the PTSD experts I’ve interviewed for my own articles on the subject is this: any help to the family helps the PTSD sufferer. Lisa Jaycox, senior behavioral scientist at the RAND Corporation, says that the more stress a family is under, the harder it is to recover from PTSD. So even if I think I can’t possibly “cure” or “fix” the underlying issue, if I can help the family by mowing the lawn for them or bringing some meals, by offering to watch the kids for a while or by cleaning their house, that all serves to help relieve pressure that someone with PTSD just may not be equipped to handle. I would also encourage the veteran to get plugged in with other vets dealing with similar issues (preferably with a leader trained to really help), because so many times veterans don’t want to share their traumatic experiences with loved ones because they want to keep their minds innocent of the horrors of war.


Iraqi War Veterans Organization

with link to local advocates in North Carolina

Veterans Program at Citrus College

Boots to books with link to opportunity to donate for veterans to get books for program.

Monday, March 22, 2010

Writing a Book Review

Here's a nice link if you're writing a book review. It includes a sample book review on To Kill a Mockingbird and steps you can take in writing your own review.

Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Myth Resources

Prometheus and Pandora
at Myth Encyclopedia

The Judgment of Paris
at Living Myths

The Trojan War
at Stanford site

Persephone and Demeter
at Myth Man
at Sweet Briar College site
at Paleothea, Women in Myths


Theseus and the Minotaur
at Paleothea
at YouTube--animated
at YouTube

Hercules
at Tufts University site

Daedalus & Icarus
at Myth Man's Homework Help Center

Eros & Psyche
at Myth Man's Homework Help Center
at Paleothea

Echo & Narcissus
at Myth Man
at Paleothea

Oedipus Myth
at Myth Man

Antigone
at Paleothea

Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Can you say it in six words or less?

Never really finished anything, except cake.

Check out these other six word memoirs at the NPR site.

Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Is 100 Minutes Long Enough to Write an Essay?

We hope?

This week we've been working on a sane approach to the kind of timed 100-minute essay that is required for the writing test in March.

Here are the steps we came up with so far:
  1. Read the prompt.
  2. Understand the prompt. Pay particular attention to form and audience. A letter to the school board? A speech to a group of parents? An article for the school paper? Form and audience matters!
  3. Brainstorm. Whether you make a list or some kind of word splash, the point here is to begin to know what you know. What are the details you already know about the topic that you can use as building blocks to your essay?
  4. Make a map. True, some people prefer to start writing rather than mapping when they're beginning an essay. And, if you have a week to write an essay, that method can work well. When you only have 100 minutes, nearly everyone--including myself--needs to make a map to ensure that the essay will have some kind of order.
  5. Draft and introduction. Introductions are so important. They make that first impression. And, when in doubt, fall back on the classic three-part form for an introduction: A hook that addresses your audience; a link to your thesis; and, finally, your thesis.
  6. Write. Aim for filling the two pages that are provided.
  7. Edit. Make sure each sentence you've written is a complete sentence. Check spelling.
That's it. And entirely doable in 100 minutes. The key is practicing this a few times so that it begins to feel like second nature.

Saturday, January 16, 2010

Let the Writing Begin

We're starting a new semester of English II and have had a productive first week with lots of writing. If I can get a hold of the photos that students took of our whiteboard covered with potential topics I'll post those here. Meanwhile, here are excerpts from reflections written by students at the end of one week of writing and reading and thinking. There's a lot to write and read and think about, with most students taking at least two college courses--and, in some cases, as many as five. I think we're off to a strong start.

About Writing and the Daybook:
At first I didn’t know what to write but after a while I learned to just let go while I watched my hand fly across the paper to its own accord.

Writing is powerful. When you write something down you can see it and it is no longer just a thought floating around. By your thoughts being on paper, they have a meaning.

Writing helps me show my emotions the same way as when you make a painting.

One of my revelations that occurred this week was that writer’s block is really just your inner critic refusing to let your creativity reach its fullest potential.

I feel like writing is a better thing to do [as opposed to reading and interpreting] even though my hand says the opposite of this.

The daybook helps me to douse my insecurity.

The daybook takes away those “handcuffs” so you can write what you want, when you want.

About the Self:
I have found out more about myself as a writer over this last week than I have in the last nine years that I have been writing. Which makes me wonder, what took me so long to be able to try to figure myself out?

I am the kind of writer who draws inspiration from books, songs, other people, and past experiences; the kind of writer who now knows techniques to tell the inner critic to go away and go get coffee or something.

I’m the type of person who likes to ball everything up inside. And it’s not good when a person does that. It creates wrath inside. I believe if the world didn’t know how to read or write the world would go mad.

I struggle most with being Mr. Summary. You know, the kind of guy who takes a four page narrative essay and turns it into a one page summation.

My first reflection paper says that I am the type of writer who likes to write poetry and is inspired by music, emotions, and everyday life. I had never realized this was true until you asked that question. At that moment I realized that my life revolved around poetry. Every day I am looking for new things to write about and I don’t even realize it.

When we were going around the classroom sharing I was hit by a memory from elementary school so vividly it was like I was really there for an instant. It was Valentine’s Day, and all the children from my class had gone outside to play duck duck goose. I don’t remember seeing people and faces, all I could see were the trees and the sky. This short glimpse, though, showed me the difference between the way I saw things as a child and how I do now.

One activity this week triggered an epiphany. During the timeline, I was writing down memories and as I looked back over it I realized that the bad memories I had all played a part in shaping the kind of person and writer I am.

About English Class:
This class makes you think a lot. You have to stay outside the box.

I can share my writing or I can choose not to. I can read out loud or I can choose not to. There is a choice. Everyone likes to have a choice. It makes them feel important.

My favorite part of this course is that I don’t have to share unless I feel comfortable. A lot of teachers try to force students into sharing and that makes me really nervous. I feel a little bit shy right now, but I have a feeling I’ll be more comfortable in a couple of weeks.

About Reading:
A topic always has a meaning about what one is about to read and is also connected to the author and how he or she feels. Although I knew this before, I’ve never given much importance towards whether my assignments have a significant meaning to me. After this week I learned that I can always relate to what I am writing about, making the assignment more entertaining.

About the short chapter, “Stories Matter”:
I could picture everything in my head. I could see the mother’s agony in her eyes. The kids pulling on their mother’s clothes begging for food or a drop of water. People coming up to the reporter thinking she’s a doctor. I picture it all. This is great because if I start picturing things then I start writing more which is a great way to start.

About the essay, “The Silk Parachute”:
It was random and messy, but done in a very proper fashion where it all made sense in the end.

About the Week:
But the high expectation coming from my dad is almost life threatening. I mean, yeah, I made it look easy in K-5, but who can’t make it look easy then?

Monday, October 26, 2009

A How-to Manual

Here's a draft of the Power Point I'm showing you in class for the process we'll go through as we read these texts. I may need to revise it as we go along to make it work for us, but for right now this is the way I'm seeing the process.

Sunday, October 25, 2009

The Results Are In

Here are the Classic Lit Groups. If you made your first choice clear, you got it. If you left it up to the fates, this is what the fates have decided for you. The Iliad has 2 groups, Oedipus has 1, and The Inferno, the most popular choice, has 3.

Each group will need to decide on a group leader (who will coordinate tasks), a recorder (who will keep the log and keep track of documents), and a speaker (who will present for the group as we go along). Groups with four people will also have a jack of all trades who will keep track of time for tasks as well as assist with research and keeping track of documents.

Recorder will keep a log for the group at GOOGLE DOCS, using the same log-in and password as we use for the blog.

ILIAD
Ellen
Miranda
Liam

Mario
Daniel G.
Brittany
James

OEDIPUS
Breyinn
Daniel A.
Bianca
Cerafina

INFERNO
Morgan
Emily
Cassidy

Bermuda
Jordan
Dalila
Reese

Victoria
Liz
Jillian

Phase One: The Big Picture

Each person will begin by making three documents to get you oriented to the big picture for your piece of literature. You can collaborate in any way that you like within your group, but each person will need each of the three pieces in your folder. Possible resources include Shmoop and Spark Notes.

A. A Character Map (at least 10 characters)

B. A Timeline or Plot Map (at least 10 plot points--try and figure out what are the 10-12 most important points)

C. A List of Important Facts that Create Context (at least 10 facts)

Note for ILIAD GROUP---It will help you understand The Iliad if you organize your character map by which characters are affiliated with the Greeks and which with Troy. Also, consider which are mortals and which are gods and goddesses.

Note for OEDIPUS GROUP----Your character chart will be shorter (less than 10 characters) and your plot is simpler, so I am going to ask you to do more with context. Check out these sites to learn more about Greek Theater and aim for 15-20 key facts:
The Origins of Theater
The First Plays
Types of Greek Drama

Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Classic Literature Choices

Choices, choices, choices-----
Here are some brief descriptions & lots of resources:

THE ILIAD BY HOMER

First published on a scroll in the 8th century BC, this is
the earliest known text of European literature.
In the mood for a war story? Want to take a closer look at a warrior's rage?

The Iliad on Shmoop
Characters in Iliad
Iliad Performance on YouTube
Virtual Iliad
Textbook
The Iliad On-Line
Free audio download of Iliad
Women in the Iliad
Iliad Game
Podcast on NPR comparing film Troy to Iliad


THE INFERNO BY DANTE
Written in the fourteenth century, this is part of a larger work, The Divine Comedy, in which the hero travels through hell, purgatory and heaven. The Inferno is the account of the hell tour. Many circles involved.
Feel drawn to hell imagery? This is the one for you.

The Inferno on Shmoop
The World of Dante--tons of good resources----
Textbook
Inferno On-Line
Danetworlds--a multi-media site
Inferno Webquest
Inferno Images
Hell--comparison among different cultures at Myth Encyclopedia
Compare to another hero in hell--The Myth of Sisyphus by Camus

OEDIPUS REX BY SOPHOCLES
An ancient Greek tragedy.
A plague hits the city. The king--Oedipus--must solve the riddle to lift the curse. Tragedy ensues. It's not pretty. Interested in issues of how much control each of us has over our own destiny? This is the play for you.

Short short version of Oedipus on YouTube
Oedipus on Shmoop
Greek Choral Reading
Oedipus lesson at PBS including Full & Reader's Theater version of Oedipus Rex
Textbook
Film of Oedipus Rex--(1984)

Sunday, October 18, 2009

Looking Ahead to Classic Novels

Here are works of classic and near-classic world literature that can be used for your December project or paper. More details on this project will be forthcoming. If you know you're going to need some time to read your classic, I'd suggest you begin now with this as your book of choice. You could, if you like, read it once now, just to get the plot and big ideas, and reread selected sections later.

I'd also suggest that you use a bookmark to make notes--on characters, key quotes, pivotal scenes--anything which will help you understand the book--and might help you write about it later. If you already have a good idea of how you might want to do a creative project on your book talk to me. Then you can be more focused in your notes as you're reading. You will have the option, when the time comes, of doing individual or collaborative projects.

The essential first step here, after exploring these novels a bit, and writing brief summaries of five (this an in-class activity) will be to choose your book, figure out how you can get a copy, and begin reading. Need help finding one of these books? Talk to me. Having trouble choosing? Consider reading more than one.

SIGN UP SHEET IS HERE
(Sign up using first names only--or pen names.)

1984 by George Orwell
A dystopian novel published in 1949.
Deals in a more in-depth way with many of the issues raised in The Hunger Games--totalitarian regimes and how an individual can and might respond in the face of such.
Digital booktalk
1984 on Shmoop
1984 at Amazon

Pride and Prejudice
by Jane Austen
More than a movie with Keira Knightley, this classic novel published in the early 1800's was ahead of its time in looking at marriage and at issues between women and men. It's funny too.
A short booktalk
Short short summaries
Pride and Prejudice on Shmoop


Night by Elie Wiesel
This novel, based on Nobel Peace Prize Winner Elie Wiesel's experiences in a concentration camp, is a powerful classic read and appreciated by many sophomores in World Lit classes. I have multiple copies of this.
Elie Wiesel at NPR talking about the importance of bearing witness
Night at Amazon
Night on Shmoop
Digital booktalk


The Color Purple
by Alice Walker
This novel, which focuses on African-American sisters in the 1930's received both the Pulitzer Prize and the National Book Award in 1982. Written as a series of letters, the topic of siblings is something I thought many of you might find appealing. Has some explicit content--and deals with tragic early circumstances--but ultimately is a about the healing and empowering potential in relationships.
Book review
The Color Purple on Shmoop

We Were the Mulvaneys by Joyce Carol Oates
Another well-written novel about family. Contemporary. The story of what happens when a happy family falls apart. Could tie in well with the Persephone myth.
Book review




Their Eyes Were Watching God
by Zora Neale Hurston

This novel, another excellent read, published in 1937, inspired Alice Walker's A Color Purple. It's a Great Read at the Forsyth County Library and the National Endowment for the Arts this fall. The public library has multiple copies.
The Big Read
Book Review
Their Eyes Were Watching God on Shmoop


Lord of the Flies by William Golding
Like Night, this is another classic novel often read in high school. And, like Night, its author is a Nobel Prize winner. Think of this as a kind of Survivor tale with British schoolboys stranded on an island. Not a pretty story.
Digital booktalk
Review
Lord of the Flies on Shmoop

Joy Luck Club by Amy Tan
Interested in issues between mothers and daughters? Interested in the importance of stories? This novel follows four Chinese women and their Chinese-American daughters through a series of lyrical and beautifully written short stories. It deals, among other things, with the importance of stories for passing on culture from one generation to another.
Joy Luck Club at Amazon

The House of the Spirits by Isabel Allende
This popular and critically acclaimed novel, first published in 1982, follows three generations of a family in Chile. Combines politics, family, romance and magical realism.
Book Review
House of the Spirits at Amazon

Wuthering Heights by Emily Bronte
A gothic nineteenth century novel with strong chords of romance and the supernatural. Twilight lovers may find this one appealing.
Wuthering Heights on Shmoop
Text available online



Love in the Time of Cholera by Gabriel Garcia Marquez
First published in 1985 in Spanish, it was later translated into English. This fourth novel, again by a Nobel Prize winner, contains, like House of the Spirits, elements of magical realism.
Love in the Time of Cholera at Amazon



Siddhartha by Herman Hesse
This is yet another novel often read in sophomore World Lit classes. It follows the inner spiritual journey of a young man in India who encounters the Buddha. A great choice if you're interested in spiritual quests. I have multiple copies.
Siddhartha on Shmoop



Into the Wild
by Jon Krakauer

This is the only book on the list that's not a novel (though Night is based on a true story). First appearing as an article in Outside magazine, this narrative describes the inner and outer journey of a young man who went into the wilds of Alaska. Heartbreaking story. Beautifully written. Meshes beautifully with our study of hero's journey. I know at least one student in the class is choosing this one--has already chosen it.
Excerpt
Book summary
Into the Wild on Amazon

Thursday, October 8, 2009

A Time for Sharing

I'm thinking the best way to get these slide presentations in one place for presenting and viewing is to load them to a SlideShare account that I've created for our class. Even if you trust your flash drive I'd like you to upload them so I can review them on-line following your presentation. Thanks.

Here are the steps:

  1. Go to Slideshare
  2. Log in with the username and password for our class (same as blog)
  3. Click on upload along the top of the page
  4. Choose single upload
  5. Upload your powerpoint----and there you have it---no flash drive worries--you can just go to this site during class and show the presentation from there. You will want to check and make sure that it transfers without any problems.

Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Transformation, Transformation, Transformation

While thinking about your hero or heroine's transformation, it might be nice to have a rich vocabulary for transformation.

Remember. It's not just about what they do--or what happens to them--it's also about how they are changing as all of this is happening--and how perhaps they are changing the world around them.

Consider these synonyms for transformation:

alteration, mutation, conversion, metamorphosis, transfiguration, transmutation, sea change; revolution, overhaul; remodeling, reshaping, redoing, reconstruction, rebuilding, reorganization, rearrangement, reworking, renewal, revamp, remaking, remake; transmogrification, morphing.